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Monday, October 16, 2017

News report

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Crime scene
by Shontae Henare
In New Zealand, Christchurch  there has been a crime committed.

Where in Christchurch? In the suburb of Hornby at Delmain park on October the 25 2016.The family are devastated about this tragedy. They are sad because she is only just young as she is only 11. The investigator’s said “That it looked like she had been pushed or had dived in”. They were not sure how long she had been there for.We have asked the family if they knew she was going to be there. They said “They did”. That is all the news we have right now.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shontae,

    Great news report! It was just like something I might hear on the news. The use of facts and figures made it sound very professional. You made me feel intrigued. What was the girl doing near the pond? Why would she dive in, did she see something? Who would push her? I hope she is okay and has a speedy recovery.

    Michael (Team 100WC), Warwick, UK.

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